If it is wrong to live the way u r...
then i confess n i say I DO...
If it is wrong to say that u love someone...
then i kneel and i admit I DO...
If it is wrong to be what you are...
then i beg of no forgiveness and accept I DO...
If it is wrong to be upset n broken on refusal...
then i promise to never to regret but as of now I DO...
If its wrong to have given ur heart in someone else's custody...
then i fear i have committed the crime and i promise never to be the same again
everything in life changes and they say that life is the best teacher...
but against all odds if you love someone and thats wrong...
i prefer to beg for no apology and with a head held high on the altar of love ...
I SOLEMNLY AGREE TO GIVE UP EVERYTHING
BUT OH DARLING I CANT HELP BUT SAY "I DO"...
8 comments:
well dats 1 of d simplest n d best postngs yar..wel done dude!!it jst hz dat AMIT factr..never say die:))
Hey man!
Can I have the copyrights of this one when I need it. I thought the proposal made by Narayana Murthy to Sudha Murthy was the proposal of the century... now I know better. This one's a collector's item. Genius.
Do consider my application for copyright!
@pranav::
hey... thanx bhaiya actlly this was a jot down wen i was sitting idle thinkin precisely NOTHIN.
so i dunno how it took shape but thanx neways...and bout the copyright, u ll have it wenevr u want so rest assured. ;)
Dis wz due;)anywz any gal anytym wud say yes..lyf is too gud to b wasted thnkng on sumthng whch wl nt materializ,nnjy lyf!:)
This is a genius verse Man..keep it up..
If love n romance in its darkest n most callous forms can foment such art ..hey Hail Love..!!
OK but twas great..
gud luck..!!
aha...thts again something really good...."a chat wd life"...sometimes even i do....n most of the times we all do it...only very few ppl like U hv GUTS to pen it down...
...gr8 work!!!
i dont want to undermine the feel that incites such a writing by my trifle comments
written with such great finesse...awesome.the lines speak loads abt you..:)
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