"Hi " oh life thou said to me...
asked me in a stranger voice "how are u" ...
and i dint know what i was to say to it
coz i wasn't apt in getting it thru...
the juvenile rush in me,had it died ???
i don't know but i was petrified.
it asked me again and again and again,
coz i hadn't yet an answer that wud make it.
it was all so jumbled, entangled and messed up, to pain...
I found that i really don't know how to handle it
oh it seemed so tough...
and i really stopped to think "AM I A DUFF"...
"NO " was the answer and i knew that it was true...
coz someday i really plan to make it thru...
humble at soul i stood right there...
i dint still have an answer to what it was as if it were...
for me a hallucination coz this cant be true...
why would life be confronting you???
As long as u wish u can seem to not bother...
but really is it the reason or is the reason something other...
not getting my way thru the labyrinth of thoughts...
i still stand on the edge as on the rocks...
holding my hands mutually making them to rue...
i think that some day i ll make it thru.
Down i was shattered once, stayed on though
i dint even seem to bother how life would go...
does it happen to everyone or does it happen to me alone??
was the thought i had in my mind... coz i was never so sad to be forlorn
"thank u life" i said "to visit me,
i would never forget wat u taught..."
I am not the one i was before and i have changed for the better and that was a LOT...
5 comments:
Astonishing Marvellous Incredible Totally Enthalling!!!!!!!
the magical wreath what u have created with life needs an appalause. your piece is sooooooo nice that i am surprised that very few persons have given their comments!! WAIT & WATCH INTEZZAR KA PHAL MITHA HOTHA HAI waiting impatiently 4 ur next blog
@nibedita:
hi dere thanx for ur appraisal...
ur comments build me up for the forthcoming...
i assure u the next one ll be worth the wait
Wel ur take on lyf is sumthng vry few ppl wil undrstnd,coz its sumthng whch needs an inner depth n an insight..a creative piece of wrk bt cud hav been mre optimistic.
@ chinks::
thanx for readin the blog chinks...coz i dunno know who u r..so i think that the reason for this is that i have been a very confused person as of recent so...
NEways thanx for the appreciation.
plz do reveal ur identity...u can catch me at loveamit4u2000@gmail.com
There r at times we dont get wat we want in life AMIT....but to live a life ....we hv to accept the flow of time n situations...a better advise..."LOVE THE ONE WHO LOVES U N NOT THE 1 WHOM U LOVE... LOOK AROUND N U LL FIND HER..STILL WAITING 4 U TO APPROACH ...life goes on... the way time does!!"...
wish u a very happy n successful life
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