The feelings in my hearts i can't express...
The quest of my life is to start afresh...
Is it worth it or is it a futile chase...
The want of being with you: is it a never ending phase?
I don't really know what this is would groom...
Is it my fault or am i destined to this doom?
Half the words we said weren't meant to be...
All the dreams we saw, were they just a plea?
I don't really know anything as i stare into the sky so starry...
How do i define the past year of my life? bright or chary...
All we dreamed of was a tiny house near the sea shore...
With you waiting for me as i returned from my daily chore...
A coffee and a chat with you...
All my weariness to freshness getting converted into...
A family dinner with you sitting beside me...
With our hands below the table in a tussling spree...
Would forget all these and start all over again...
Only if i had a mind of chips and a chest numb to pain...
The sea stands still, coffee has gone sour, but i try to be happy in few...
Just that the definition of my happiness has changed into "I MISS YOU"...
9 comments:
Buddy . nice post
There are so many vibrant thigs waiting for you to embrace man..
Things come and go. Seldom they are meant to be eternal. On the brighter side, you are lucky to have 'em in the truest sense, how ephemeral it might be..
So,I m sure you will bounce back rockin' in you Pursuit Of Happyness !!!
hi
beautiful is still a small word for this piece ........... this seemed to be soaked in emotions ............ i liked it a lot..and should mention the last line............ the most.......keep writing meaningful posts like this..keep rocking
:)
sir,
u r fabulous. I cudnt imagine dat u r such a heart touching writer. ur words really move direct thru heart. plz continue writing like this, u r superb especially dat i miss u . WOWWWWWWWWWWWW
Hey Siddhartha Mohapatra here.....you write wonderful poems buddy......by the tone of your poems(most of them being about love, separation, et al) i can gauge whr u look for inspiration ...lolzzzz ... tell me her nam...won't you...no seriously dude....u write wellll...keep it up....
beautiful expression..indeed very touching..
d best ever ..piece i ever read...ur poems hav a speciality ....they take one to the kind of world u imagine......its jst .....have no words to fill it..
too sweet 2 touch d heart...
woooooooow........awesome post.....but m pained 2 hear this story....who is dis dame who duped sch a bright smart handsome cool guy??? haan?! keep writing...b it sorrow, pain or happiness....let d feelings flow....:)
thanks di...
names not to be mentioned...
It doesn't matter anyway. Jst a hollow left behind it feels...sometimes though...
Hope u liked the post :)
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